Sunday, July 18, 2004
ok...this is like...a poem i jux worte 15 mins ago...hahax..fresh from the oven...
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oh my darling
can't you notice
my burning desire
so strong
yet shy
burning inside me
you are in my heart
all throughout
i dream of you
holding you tightly
not letting you go
are you really mine?
i really want you
do not run away from me
i just cant live without you
~end~
haha...write this without any reason..just got the yu gan...haha...u noe...if you don't know me,you wouldnt believe that i am the writing poem sort of person sia..hahaha...you know...i am desprately trying to type proper english here...wait someone here come and critise me again...aiyo...can lahx...(shit..singlish)people....write comments lehx!!(singlish again)ok...here is another one
as i look into his eyes,
i felt a splurge to embrace
the one i love
this feeling so deep
so strong,yet
he didnt even know
yes,i love him
with almost all my heart
all my soul
that i didn't have the guts to tell him so
something i wonder
why doesnt he show
all his emotions in him wellow
i shall let fate decide
what my next step shall be
but i forsee
the great blossoming love to be
is appearing right in front of me
~end~
how is it???how????comment lehx!!ok...i tink its enough for today...i shall continue next time okie???look out for my new works(is it said this way??)
lost without you;
Sunday, July 18, 2004
